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Sundays chapter

Hey, I am going on a small trip so the Sundays chapter might be a little late. At most it will be late for one or two days but I will try my best to get it out on Sunday. Sorry for the possible delay and thank you for reading.

Living in the cave.

2         5. Living in the cave When the woman came back in the cave she told that her name is Alessa and we should clean up the cave so it wouldn’t start smelling bad, we pulled the dead people out of the cave and she set them on fire. I don’t really know how she did it, it didn’t seem like she had equipment to make fire. Now she is in the first room as she said that she would clean out the blood stains from the ground.  When I first found her in the room I thought that it would be difficult to kill her because I had no strength left and she was in a cage. I thought whether to wait to regain my strength or try to kill her right there and then but when I saw her feared expression I thought she wouldn’t cause me harm if I let her go. When she asked to stay here I was surprised and wondered if she wanted to stay to try to harm me but then she explained she wouldn’t survive outside. I decided to let her live here as she probably will be usefu...

Training arc.

Hi. As you might have noticed, in the Melissa´s Archway there has begun a training arc and it is taking longer than I anticipated so I will try to write more chapters next week to get the different point of views out of the way as some might not want to wait weeks to get back into the Melissa´s point of view. If I am unable to write the individual training for each of the characters next week then I will just advance the story and write them later. Next Sunday I will write the chapter group training and after that the training arc ends and the group will continue their journey. Thank you for reading and if you have any feedback on the story or the writing please let me know.

Individual training

7. Individual training -Melissa- “Get up, you have some training to do.” I feel the force of someone kicking me in the stomach and I open my eyes immediately, I can feel my broken bones move inside of me and the taste of blood in my mouth is increased. “Finish this potion as I explain your training routine.” Cyril says as he hands me an open potion vial. I drink the rest of the potion and the pain lessens rapidly. “The rest are already gone to do their own training and you will all do this alone for a while. This will help you stop compensating your weaknesses with your teamwork, teamwork should come after all members are strong enough on their own. You can leave your shield there, you will only need your sword for this training. Your routine will start with a quick duel with me, then you will go run in the forest and at the end of the run you will kill one orc by yourself. If you´re still alive after that you will run to the pond while healing yourself an...

More chapters

Hello people. I just posted the fourth chapter of The Derelict Boy and you might be wondering that why was it posted on Friday and not Thursday as I said in the page about me and TUTS that I would post one chapter of The Derelict Boy every two weeks on Thursdays and the reason is because I was super busy these last two weeks.  I still managed to post the Melissa´s Archway chapters on time but The Derelict Boy was too much for me to write and I couldn't write this chapter on time for Thursday, I then decided that the Schedule for The Derelict Boy would start next week as it will but there would have been too big of a gap between the chapters so I wrote one bonus chapter and I will write another one for next Thursday.  So in conclusion the schedule will start from the next Thursday and this was just an extra chapter. Thank you for reading and I hope it wasn't too big of a wait. See you Sunday hopefully. 

An encounter in the cave.

 4.    An encounter in the cave. -Alessa´s point of view- My back is hurting, I wake up and my back feels so stiff that I can barely move. I open my eyes and see metal bars all over me and I remember that I was kidnapped on my way to the meet up. I start shaking when I think all the horrible things they might do to me, I sit by resting my back between the bars. I wipe away the tears that are starting to drop on my dress, I won’t get to meet with my cousin now and when I said goodbye to my family I didn’t think it would be the last time. I start gathering the mana but the amount of mana here is nonexistent and the amount I need to drown myself is large. My hands are shaking and my vision is getting blurry from the watery eyes but I have gathered enough mana to cast the spell. I hear someone open the door and I lose my concentration and the mana disperses from my grasp, I lose all strength in me as the terror of the situation dawns to me. It is quite dark...

Magic training.

6. Magic training “Here, drink these. They will heal you so you can focus on the magic training.” Cyril handed us two vials with purple liquid. I take the vial and drink the purple liquid, it tastes bitter but it has a sweet after taste. I feel the pain disappear and I could move normally again. “Before we start I will have to tell you a few things you need to watch out when you go into a populated area. The level of magic I am going to teach you is way above the normal level of the world so if you go around showing it off there will be consequences. Same with her healing magic, if people find about it they will see you as a threat and try to eliminate you so keep it a secret. Another thing is that even with all this training there will be many monsters you are unable to beat so you need to improve more after you leave here and do not think that you are invincible. Last thing is that the potions I give to you are crazy expensive and I am expecting you to repay m...

Editing the Melissa´s Archway and new book.

Hey guys, I have been thinking about changing the dialogue from the early chapters of Melissa´s Archway to normal and I will do it soon just do not know when but when I do that I will also look through it and see if I can see any mistakes in it and if I can i will change it.  Also I have been thinking about starting a new book for a while and I have been thinking about the story quite a lot. It will probably be about a vampire blacksmith that makes magic weapons, in a big city. It will be in a much more magic rich environment so it should be much more fantasy than my earlier books have been.  The earlier books will get more fantasy as they journey closer to the magical lands but it will take time, a lot. I will write one Melissa´s Archway chapter a week even when I start writing the new book so there is no worry that there will be less of that but it will make the Derelict boy chapters come out slower. Thank you for reading, see you next Sunday at the latest.

The cabin in the woods.

Training arc begins. 5. The cabin in the woods We go inside the cabin, the interior of is plain and there are only two shelves, a bed small table with one chair and a tiny kitchen. Cyril puts Marie down on the bed and takes a potion from the shelf. “This is a healing potion for physical injuries and it will heal her completely in twelve hours.” Cyril shows the potion to us and walks back to the bed. “Can you let me, do it?” asks Martin. “Yeah, go for it but just to let you know it’s an expensive potion so don’t fuck it up.” Martin takes the potion from Cyril and gently pours the red liquid in Marie’s mouth. “Now that that’s been taken care of, we have some talking to do.” “Thank you, Cyril.” I burst out while bowing down to him. “I don’t mind helping you brats out but you have to go back to your mountain now.” “I am sorry but that would be impossible.” I say while still bowing to him. “It is not, I can just bust the gate open and let you guys go back t...