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Magic training.

6. Magic training “Here, drink these. They will heal you so you can focus on the magic training.” Cyril handed us two vials with purple liquid. I take the vial and drink the purple liquid, it tastes bitter but it has a sweet after taste. I feel the pain disappear and I could move normally again. “Before we start I will have to tell you a few things you need to watch out when you go into a populated area. The level of magic I am going to teach you is way above the normal level of the world so if you go around showing it off there will be consequences. Same with her healing magic, if people find about it they will see you as a threat and try to eliminate you so keep it a secret. Another thing is that even with all this training there will be many monsters you are unable to beat so you need to improve more after you leave here and do not think that you are invincible. Last thing is that the potions I give to you are crazy expensive and I am expecting you to repay m

Editing the Melissa´s Archway and new book.

Hey guys, I have been thinking about changing the dialogue from the early chapters of Melissa´s Archway to normal and I will do it soon just do not know when but when I do that I will also look through it and see if I can see any mistakes in it and if I can i will change it.  Also I have been thinking about starting a new book for a while and I have been thinking about the story quite a lot. It will probably be about a vampire blacksmith that makes magic weapons, in a big city. It will be in a much more magic rich environment so it should be much more fantasy than my earlier books have been.  The earlier books will get more fantasy as they journey closer to the magical lands but it will take time, a lot. I will write one Melissa´s Archway chapter a week even when I start writing the new book so there is no worry that there will be less of that but it will make the Derelict boy chapters come out slower. Thank you for reading, see you next Sunday at the latest.

The cabin in the woods.

Training arc begins. 5. The cabin in the woods We go inside the cabin, the interior of is plain and there are only two shelves, a bed small table with one chair and a tiny kitchen. Cyril puts Marie down on the bed and takes a potion from the shelf. “This is a healing potion for physical injuries and it will heal her completely in twelve hours.” Cyril shows the potion to us and walks back to the bed. “Can you let me, do it?” asks Martin. “Yeah, go for it but just to let you know it’s an expensive potion so don’t fuck it up.” Martin takes the potion from Cyril and gently pours the red liquid in Marie’s mouth. “Now that that’s been taken care of, we have some talking to do.” “Thank you, Cyril.” I burst out while bowing down to him. “I don’t mind helping you brats out but you have to go back to your mountain now.” “I am sorry but that would be impossible.” I say while still bowing to him. “It is not, I can just bust the gate open and let you guys go back t

Editing the Derelict Boy

Hey, I noticed how horribly i was writing the Derelict boy and how it was hard to read because there is no spaces between the text so I will now edit the first two chapters to be easier to read and if I see any mistakes or something I will correct them at the same time.

Looking through the cave.

      3.   L ooking through the cave. I wake up on the cold rock floor beside the dead body of the man I killed last night. I rise quickly and pain shoots through my body and I couldn’t even stand up. I look around while still sitting on the floor and see the same passage where I fought the man before falling asleep, I see blood on the floor here and there and I see the two open doors and a closed door to the right. I drag myself next to the wall and take support from it as I force myself to stand up. Every step I take is heavy and various places hurt as I walk slowly to the room where the man came from. I step inside the room and see the desk in the middle of the room and a chair behind it, there is a bed in the far-right corner of the room and a chest in the near-right corner behind the door. I turn around and walk slowly back to the entrance to wait for anyone who might show up late but I know that they should have come already if they were coming and I also know that

New day in a new place.

4. New day in a new place “Hey, wake up Melissa.” I open my eyes slowly and see Alice beside me. “What is going on?” “You fell asleep, so we let you sleep until we were ready to move out.” “Did I really fall asleep when I was supposed to be keeping a look out.” “Yes, but Martin was awake so its fine, I guess that is why there is two on the lookout at the same time.” “I feel like all I’ve been doing is getting taken care of the whole time.” “Not really, you got a heavy beating from the bear so it’s understandable. I felt like I was being taken care of when you went to the cave yourselves and all I did was look at the entrance.” “Being the lookout is an important job, which I failed myself.” “The point is that we must learn how to rely on each other, otherwise this trip is going to be much more difficult.” “That’s true and I should get up already if everyone is waiting for me.” I get up and go out of the tent. “Finally, awake sleepyhead?” Martin as

Only one chapter.

Hey, writing the second chapter of the Derelict Boy took up so much time so i wont be able to write two chapters of Melissa´s Archway this week and i am sorry about that. I will write the extra chapter at some point, probably next week but we will see, next chapter will come out on Sunday.

The Bandit Group.

2.     The Bandit Group. -Tom´s point of view- I’m exhausted, our last job was supposed to be an easy carriage attack but they had a guard with them in disguise and he put up a good fight against us. At least the loot was better than normal but that just meant more carrying for me, I am always getting the shittiest jobs and everyone treats me like an errand boy around here just because I’m the newest one here. “Listen up men, today was tougher than it was supposed to be so you can have the rest of the day free. We will divide the loot tomorrow so have fun tonight. Oh, one more thing, Tom go check up on Greg he didn’t show up today and I want to know why.” Just great, everyone gets a free night off and I get to run an errand. That bastard Greg has his life made already, he has a house, a woman and a kid. Still he just fools around, skipping work to drink all day, if he wasn’t one of the older bandits he would have been kicked out already. That fuckers house just has